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A Secret Turning

Family Drama | PSYCHOSPIRITUAL

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Logline

After her daughter’s self-harm shatters the illusion of their perfect life, an image-driven marketing executive turns to a Sufi spiritual practice in a desperate attempt to hold everything together—just as she and her husband become entangled in a corporate scandal that forces her to confront the cost of everything she’s built.

About the Story

A Secret Turning is a character-driven drama that blends psychological realism with lyrical symbolism. The story is propelled as much by the internal journeys of its characters as by the events of their outer lives, weaving together evocative dream sequences and layered metaphors.

 

It explores the cost of perfectionism, the legacy of generational pain, and the power of ancient spiritual practices to heal modern disconnection. The tone and approach could appeal to audiences drawn to the introspective journeys of Wild and Eat Pray Love, or the immersive reality-bending storytelling of Jacob’s Ladder.

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Synopsis

Laura Trivette is a successful, image-driven marketing executive with a seemingly perfect life – until her teenage daughter Rowan’s self-harm shatters the illusion of stability in their family. After losing her closest friend to the attraction of a more popular crowd, Rowan spirals into isolation and shame, struggling to find her place and any sense of self-worth.

Desperate to help, Laura enrolls them both in a Sufi whirling class. What begins as an attempt to fix Rowan gradually becomes something deeper. As Rowan connects with her inner self and begins forming more authentic friendships, Laura finds herself pulled into unexpected inner experiences – metaphorical visions and memories that expose the emptiness beneath the life she has carefully constructed.

At the same time, Laura’s husband Nick, CEO of a major health insurance company, faces a growing crisis when his company denies coverage for a young cancer patient who later dies. As public outrage builds, Nick is haunted by recurring dreams of an oncoming train he cannot escape, forcing him to confront the moral cost of his success.

When Laura’s firm is brought in to repair the company’s image, the family’s internal fractures collide with external pressure. As Rowan begins to rediscover her own sense of beauty and belonging, and Nick is pushed toward a breaking point, Laura must decide whether to continue preserving the life she has built—or risk everything to live more truthfully.

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Atlanta Twirlers Celebrate Rumi

Atlanta twirlers celebrate the birth of the poet and mystic Rumi through the sacred Sufi practice of the Sema. This celebration took place December 17, 2019 in Alpharetta, GA. Participating in this tradition profoundly influenced the creation of A Secret Turning and its themes of transformation, surrender, and spiritual awakening.

Script Excerpts

EXT. BARREN LANDSCAPE - DAY (LAURA'S IMAGINATION)

View of Laura from behind facing a dry brown barren landscape that stretches to the horizon, seemingly forever. Suddenly, yellow and gold leaves blow in from all directions.

ZOOM TO LAURA FROM BEHIND AND CIRCLE HER

She stares curiously at the leaves. She tries to catch them but they slip through her fingers.

BACK TO LAURA FROM BEHIND

Now, the landscape is covered with shimmering crimson and gold trees.

BACK TO PRESENT - TWIRLING CLASS - LATER

Students have returned to the circle of Zabuton sets as Amir talks to them.

 

                                                 AMIR

                      In the next year, things may begin to happen inside or                                  even outside of you that may feel disconcerting.

CLOSE-UP - LAURA

She listens intently, with curiosity.

                                                AMIR (O.S.)

                      Your identity, everything that you take yourself to

                      be, will be questioned.

BACK TO CIRCLE OF STUDENTS

Amir turns his gaze toward Laura.

                                                AMIR

                      It will be tempting to run back to what feels

                      familiar - but that is not the answer.

ZOOM SLOWLY TO LAURA’S FACE

A slight flicker of fear in her eyes.

                                               AMIR (O.S.)

                      It will be painful, but don’t be frightened. It

                      means you are waking up.

Scene from A Secret Turning screenplay of three pre-teens at lunch in a private school cafeteria.

INT. TRIVETTE KITCHEN - NIGHT

She enters the kitchen from the garage, her arms full of wrapped Christmas packages.

                                                  LAURA

                      Hello? Anybody home?

Silence.

She places her packages down and walks through the dark, silent house.

                                                  LAURA

                      Ro?

She enters the great room and notices her husband sitting in the dark.

                                                  LAURA

                             (surprised)

                      Nick?

She turns on the lamp. He sits silently, glaring at her.

                                                  LAURA

                      Where’s Ro?

                                                  NICK

                      I’ve been trying to call you for hours, and then,

                      this pops up on my phone.

He holds up his mobile, and she sees a video of herself twirling in Piedmont Park.

                                                  LAURA

                      Oh, I didn’t realize people were watching. (pause)

                      I was feeling happy.

                                                 NICK

                      Must be nice to walk away from responsibility.

                      Yeah, Andy called.

                                                 LAURA

                      Nick, this could be a new start for us.

Her face falls when she sees his stern expression.

                                                NICK

                      Did you even consider me for one moment? When you

                      decided to insult my entire leadership team, humiliating

                      me in the process? Everybody who’s somebody was in

                      that room today, Laura.

                                               LAURA

                                (laughing)

                      So? Nick, you need to quit, too. How can you

                      even consider working in that...

                                               NICK

                               (interrupting)

                       Did you know your daughter got suspended today?

                                              LAURA

                       What?

                                              NICK

                       Yeah, and where’s her mother?

He lifts the phone showing the video.

                                             NICK

                       Here she is. Losing her mind in front of the entire

                       city of Atlanta.

                                             LAURA

                       Oh no. Where is she?

                                             NICK

                       She’s fine. It’s you I’m worried about. You need

                       help, Laura.

                                             LAURA

                             (surprised)

                       I need help?

Nick stands and reaches into his pocket, pulls out a slip of paper, hands it to her.

                                            NICK

                       Tom highly recommends this woman.

She takes the paper and looks at it.

                                           NICK

                       She specializes in helping people through

                       this type of thing. Anyway...

He turns and walks toward the stairs.

                                           NICK

                       ... she works with a lot of executive level people.

He walks toward the stairs, and she follows, talking to his back.

                                           LAURA

                            (sarcastic, angry)

                       Oh, well in that case, of course - I definitely need

                       to see her so she can help me go numb like you.

He stops but doesn’t turn.

                                          NICK

                       I’ll sleep in my office tonight. 

INT. SUMMIT ACADEMY CAFETERIA - DAY

Rowan, Margo and Winston eat lunch at the misfit table.

                                           ROWAN

                      My dad says it’s just people looking for

                      someone to blame.

                                           MARGO

                            (sarcastic)

                      Oh yeah, people just randomly hurl flaming

                      pumpkins through windows.

                                           ROWAN

                      He said that his company doesn’t kill

                      people. It just ... follows the rules.

                                           MARGO

                           (mocking)

                      Just following the rules? Are you serious?

                      That’s like - step one in the “How to be a Fascist” 

                      handbook.

                                         WINSTON

                      My dad’s a doctor, and he says his practice pays

                      out the ass to help patients fight their insurance

                      companies.

                                         MARGO

                      It’s called corporate fascism.

                                         ROWAN

                         (innocent)

                      What’s that?

                                         MARGO

                      It’s when companies get so big and powerful

                      that they basically control everything - politics,

                      money, even people’s lives.

Winston spots Francesca and her clan giggling, looking over at them, whispering. They follow his gaze.

                                       WINSTON

                      I heard that Francesca got her teeth whitened

                      for the play.

They laugh.

All three of them look over at a poster hanging on the cafeteria wall promoting the school musical, “Frozen”.

                                      MARGO

                      Hey, I just heard they need help with props.

                      I see a little opportunity for payback.

Winston and Margo exchange mischievous glances and begin to grin.

Rowan doesn’t get it at first.

                                      ROWAN

                      What? (gets it) Oh.

                                      MARGO

                         (to Rowan)

                      You in?

                                      ROWAN

                         (gleefully)

                      Yes!

                                      WINSTON

                      Let’s hit them where it hurts.

Margo sticks out her fist; they follow - three fists touch.

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Themes

A Secret Turning explores the transformative journey that begins when a life built on certainty collides with a deeper call to truth, inviting us to:

A Secret Turning is a reminder that when we have the courage to face what is true, even life's greatest losses can become the beginning of something unexpectedly beautiful.

  • Choose integrity when self-preservation feels safer.

  • Awaken to difficult truths.

  • Search for a life rooted in authenticity and meaning.

  • Discover the hidden costs of ambition and success.

  • Find the courage to move forward when the path is unclear.

  • Allow adversity to become a catalyst for spiritual transformation.

  • Realize we have the power to make authentic choices.

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